Capture:
Another nightmare woke Du Miaofu
up, the horror was still reflected in her eyes. It took a long time to pass.
She closed her eyes again feeling a little faint. She sat up in bed; her room
was dimly lit and it was dark. How long has she been sleeping? What time was it
now?
She reached her hand out to get out
of bed when her wrist was suddenly grabbed and a tall figure appeared at her
bedside. Miaofu was scared and she screamed inwardly. A large hand grabbed her
face, overwhelming her, and the tall strong body pushed her back down.
She remained stiff and she stared
at the person on top of her.
In the darkness, Miaofu could
easily recognise the pair of black eyes over hers, even though they had not
seen each other for a year, but his body temperature and breath were still familiar,
familiar to her heartache.
The hand covering her mouth slowly
moved away, she trembled and she chose to be stupid, ‘Who are you? What do you
want?’
‘Who am I? What do I want?’ the
cold male voice repeated her question, his hot breath was close to her face as
his hand touched over her heart, ‘You don’t know? Don’t you understand?’ he
said was his fingers tightened over her full breast like he was punishing her.
‘Ah!’ the pain made her cry out and
her body trembled.
‘Once again, ask me who I am? What do
I want?’ this time his voice was soft like a lover’s pillow. He let go of her
breast and pulled open her thin shirt. He gently caressed every inch of her
skin, feeling her trembling beneath him. The eyes that looked at him had fear
and panic, but there was no trace of longing; irritating!
His black eyes filled with anger,
and with that anger he kissed her soft lips, gnawed hard, bit deep till there
was blood. She whimpered out of fear. (Zuben: Hey honey, we haven’t seen each
other in a while, let me rape you to make up for lost time!)
What was she crying?
When he realised she had fallen off
the cliff, his heart was almost broken. When he learned that she might still be
alive, he almost cried. This past year, he searched for her day and night,
trying every means to find a trace of her, but he was always blocked. Someone
would not let him find her.
Who was it?
He had been angry and anxious, but
what about her? She appeared before him without any heart or soul, even
pretended not to know him.
Fine, she was ruthless! She didn’t
love him, did not love him at all! (Zuben: Yes because you will know someone
loves you by forcing them to have sex with you)
Qin Yaotang entered her roughly,
she wept in pain. Her vagina tightened obstructively, pushing him out, wanting
him to leave.
She shouldn’t even think about it.
Disregarding her pain, he continued
to thrust in. He wanted her to remember his existence, make her never forget
him again.
‘Nnn…’ Miaofu’s weeping was
swallowed by him, her lips tingled like it was not her own. Her body was
heavily caressed by him. She was in a lot of pain all over. His heat ran
through her, and she trembled in pain, but she felt his presence deeply. With
every intrusion, her soul was occupied.
He was so terrible scaring her like
this.
Tears could not help but fall down
her eyes, trembling as he crushed her flower, but she could not resist the bite
of the beast. Red honey flowed, he thrust fiercely putting his hot liquid
deep into her. He gasped. She sobbed. Their bodies remained close together. He
was still inside her, and his strong breath surrounded her.
His strong body moved –
‘Don’t…’she cried thinking there
was going to be another wave of abuse. She shrunk her body. But he withdrew
from her and stepped out of the bed. He went and came back.
She watched in fear as her legs
were pulled open and he touched her warm red inflamed flower. She shivered,
subconsciously protesting,
‘Don’t move.’ He commanded.
Miaofu immediately stilled and bit
her injured lip.
He gently wiped the fluids from her
core with a damp cloth, gently stroking the reddened tender petals wiping away
the rudeness he had left behind.
She watched him quietly, she could
not see his expression clearly in the dark, but she could feel his gentleness,
which was completely different from his brutality.
She didn’t understand him, but she
didn’t understand herself. His brutality made her afraid, but his gentleness made
her attached.
Yaotang raised his eyes and
captured her eyes, he wasn’t surprised that she avoided his gaze. He sighed,
dropped the damp cloth and reached out to her. He ignored her stiffness as he
lay down on the bed and placed her on top of him. His hand stroked her soft
black hair, gently caressing back and forth like he was petting a kitten.
On top of him, Miaofu was tense at
first, but under his gentle caress, she gradually relaxed and rested against
him. Her ears against his chest, listening to his heartbeat.
The steady thumping of his heart
made her let go of her fear, her hand touched his chest and she breathed in his
familiar scent.
Somehow, she felt like crying.
She did cry, her warm tears dripped
on to his chest, one drop after the other.
He sighed gently, ‘I haven’t been
mean to you, yet you’re crying.’ He sounded helpless.
She didn’t reply, she continued to
cry.
Yaotang turned over and overwhelmed
her. He lifted her face and gently kissed her tears. He gave her butterfly
kisses, softly and gently before finally taking her lips. Softly licking the
lips his had bitten. He sucked on her lips and gently penetrated her fragrant
mouth.
His desire hardened again, and he
gently penetrated her delicate flower, slowly entering her, pushing deep into
her.
‘Ah…’her long slender legs wrapped
around him and her small tongue entangled with his, moaning from his gentle
lovemaking. His hand stroked her snowy breast, pushing it up to lick on the
tip. He caressed her, teasing her sensitive places, making her more moist,
making her nectar overflow giving off a sweet smell.
She shyly moaned, Yaotang loved to
listen to her moaning, he released her lips and bit her slender shoulder,
‘Cry out, I like to hear it.’
Miaofu bit her lip, feeling too shy
but his gentle thrusts were long and deep.
‘Ah!’ the moan broke out from her
lips.
‘So nice.’ He pulled her so she was
sitting on top of him. His manhood was deeper, and this position put her
breasts within his mouth’s reach. He could fill his mouth with her delicious
flesh. Suckling on her breast, his large
hand held her waist pushing hard upwards, smashing her most vulnerable stamen
to make her cry out with the most pleasant sound.
Her delicate and tender body was
the best instrument. It was a sound unique to her, and he was hooked and drawn in
with her seductive sounds. Under his attack, Miaofu could no longer hold back,
she threw back her head and her hair hung down. Her hands hung around his neck,
and her breasts were presented to him, while he ran through and occupied her
secret flower.
Love juice poured out soaking their
lower abdomen inflaming his need. She was shaking, her rose red mouth was
open and her tight wet flower made Yaotang crazy. He thrust harder upwards,
enjoying her beautiful tightness, his lips entangled a nipple and sucked
heavily. He fucked her wildly spilling his hot liquid.
Feeling his heat, her lower abdomen
burned. Miaofu panted softly, and nestled on his sweaty chest. Yaotang bowed
and kissed her, he held her down still buried within her reluctant to leave.
The their breathing intertwined, he kissed her lips, every inch of her small
face and finally back to her lips. Gentle kisses, one by one.
Mioafu looked at him, her breathing was
still fast, her lips were swollen by his kisses, her lips were still painful,
her mouth was still filled with his taste.
She wanted to speak but she didn’t
know what to say, fearing she would destroy the sweetness and quietness of this
time.
Seeing her thoughts, Yaotang sighed
and pulled her closer into his arms and gently glared at her,
‘Sleep,’ he commanded. He was also
afraid to break the tenuous peace and like her, chose to avoid it.
Miaofu blinked, breathing in his
scent, exhaustion claimed her and she soon fell asleep.
He listened to her steady
breathing, his fingers caressing her hair and his arms around her.
Finally, she was in his arms again…this
time whether she wanted it or not, he would not let her go.
Anxious footsteps came up to the
door, Yaotang woke up and looked at the woman sleeping in his arms. His black
eyes were soft and his lips lifted in a small smile, when the door was pushed
open.
‘Miaofu, are you…!’
There was silence, as the intruder
spotted the man in the bed and the smell in the room. Chuwei face went black
and white, and immediately pointed at him,
‘Who is this damned bastard?’ she
roared cutting through the still morning. Shortly after, there were hurried
footsteps and A Hao appeared,
‘What wrong? What happened? Jiejie,
what happened?’ Jiang Haocheng asked, he lived in the same courtyard. He had only
worn his undershirt and rushed out. The old woman was pregnant, he didn’t was
anything to happen to her on his watch.
Jiang Haocheng ran up to Chuwei and
followed his older sister’s gaze into the room. His mouth fell open,
‘Bi-big brother…’ what was
happening?
Qin Yaotang, the big brother he
referred to was a master of Gu Yunbao, his father-in-law’s chief disciple. He
had a taciturn personality, but his he was a modest gentleman. Right now, this
“gentleman” was naked in Miaomiao’s bed. Taking in the messy bed, the clothes
strewn on the floor, and the scent of lust in the room, anyone would know what
had happened at a glance.
Jiang Haocheng mouth hung open, he
couldn’t believe his eyes.
‘What happened?’
The noise in the Bamboo courtyard
attracted a bunch of people to come over. This was the courtyard hosted the
Empress and the Princess, if something went wrong with either of them, Gu
Yunbao could not afford it.
‘Hey…Master?!’ the brothers and
sisters of Gu Yunbao had the same expression as Jiang Yan.
Oh good heavens! When did Big
Brother become a flower thief?! And he could not steal any other flower; the
flower he decided to steal was the Folk Princess! And then got caught, he was
finished!
‘Yaotang-ge…?’ Song Dié-er asked
stunned, was this not the Princess’ room?
And the man in the quilt is…
‘Everyone get out!’
He had covered Miaofu with the
quilt before the Empress had burst in, so that she would not be seen. He looked
coldly at the audience and shouted, ‘Get out!’
The people were frightened by his
gaze and all hurried out, but not Empress Jiang Chuwei,
‘Who is this guy? And why is he in
Miaomiao’s bed? Are you the one who bullied Miaomiao?’ The more she looked at
him, the more she wanted to rush him.
Jiang Haocheng hurriedly held his sister
back, a cold sweat bathing his back from fear, ‘Jiejie, don’t be agitated, you
mustn’t forget you’re pregnant now.’ Besides, big brother can not afford it!
So what if she was a pregnant
woman, Chuwei glared at his hand, ‘A Hao, go!’
Go?! Jiang Haocheng sweated, how could
he fight big brother? He had to ask his wife standing nearby for assistance,
‘Wife…’
‘Don’t test my patience,’ Yaotang
said coldly, even if the person was the Empress, he did not put her in his eye.
Jiang Haocheng quickly pulled the old lady away.
‘Who are you pulling?’ she said to
her brother. She returned Qin Yaotang’s cold glare, unafraid of him.
‘Let me tell you, this old lady’s
patience is also limited. I will give you time put on your clothes.’ She turned
and walked out slamming the door behind her.
At the commotion, Miaofu had woken
up, she blushed and shyly lowered her face.
Yaotang got out of bed and got
dressed. Seeing her sitting on the bed with her head bowed, motionless, he
reached for her, ‘Why does she call you Miaomiao?’
Miaofu looked at him, and there was
a flash in her eyes, ‘Because I am not Pei Shaoqing.’
Qin Yaotang frowned, and was about
to say something to say something when the door was rudely kicked open.
‘Hey! Are you dressed?’ Chuwei
asked impatiently.
‘Jiejie, you are pregnant! Calm
down!’ the voice of Jiang Haocheng could be heard.
Yaotang frowned staring coldly at
the door, there was an impulse to seal the Empress’ mouth.
‘Come on, get dressed.’ He said
handing her clothes to Miaofu.
‘Yes.’ She said, and she put on her
clothes.
Yaotang’s frown deepened, and a
strange notion rose in his heart.
Just as Miaofu got fully dressed
the door was kicked open again. Chuwei rushed into the room, directly to Miaofu
and pulled her away from him, ‘What is your name?’
‘Qin Yaotang.’ He replied, his eyes
on Miaofu.
‘Who are you and what is your
relationship with Miaomiao? Are you the one who stabbed her and sent her off
the cliff last year?’
He did not understand who Miaomiao
was but nevertheless, he answered, ‘She is my woman. As for the matter of the
cliff, you need to ask her.’ He was still angry that she escaped from him.
Chuwei frowned and turned to Miaofu,
‘Miaomiao, tell me; did this guy push you off the cliff?’
Miaofu bit her lip and looked at
Jiang Chuwei and back to Qin Yaotang and finally shook his head, ‘No, Chuwei,
it has nothing to do with him.’
‘Really?’ Chuwei did not believe
her.
‘Yes.’ She gave a small smile and
looked softly at Yaotang, ‘He was not involved.’
Qin Yaotang’s face hardened and he
grabbed Miaofu and pulled her forward.
‘Who are you?’ Yaotang asked
Miaofu, holding her wrist tightly. His eyes were suspicious were and cold, ‘You
are not her, who are you?’
Chuwei immediately went forward to
try and save her, ‘Hey! What are you doing, this bastard…ah!’ She was pushed
back rudely, fortunately Jiang Haocheng protected her.
Seeing his sister being pushed
around rudely, Jiang Yan got annoyed, regardless of whether he was a big
brother in the Wulin, ‘Damn it! How dare you push my sister?’
‘Wait.’ Chuwei stopped her brother,
and looked at Miaofu suspiciously.
Yaotang ignored them and he stared
directly and Miaofu and asked harshly, ‘Who are you?’ This person was not her.
Yes the appearance was the same, and she had fallen asleep in his arms last
night. But this morning, when she woke up, she had disappeared. Who had taken
her place?
‘What are you saying?’ Miaofu
cried, her eyes full of tears. She had fear in her face and she turned to
Chuwei, ‘Chuwei, save me!’
Jiang Chuwei’s frown deepened, and
she stared at Miaofu.
‘Hold on! Who are you?’ Jiang Haocheng
queried taking the lead, he looked at Miaofu in amazement, ‘Jiejie, she is not
Miaomiao, definitely not!’
This was not how Du Miaofu he knew
behaved; she would not ask for help. She would not show such a weak appearance.
‘Who are you?’ Chuwei asked the
woman, ‘Where is Miaomiao?’
Du Miaofu lowered her head; her
shoulders shook as a broken sound emerged from her which turned into mad
laughter. She looked up at the people, there was still a trace of fragility in her
expression with a mixture of malice and ridicule,
‘Miaomiao? What Miaomiao? Are you
talking about the thief who occupies my body? Ha! You will never see her again,
this body is mine and I am back! I am Pei Shaoqing!’
She turned back to Qin Yaotang, her
face softened as she reached out to him but he stepped back and batted her hand
away disdainfully.
The softness immediately vanished
from her face and she glared at him, ‘You’re rejecting me? Ha! Have you
forgotten? Both of us loved last night, you held me tight…’
‘The person I held was not you.’ He
replied coldly. The face may be the same but her eyes were like a snake’s. Even
if she hid well, he could feel it, she was not her. Her eyes were determined and sincere. She may
be a bit treacherous and a little clever, but her eyes were always clear, like
glass beads in the sun they had deeply attracted him.
‘What difference does it make?
Isn’t it still my body?’ she rushed forward and looked at him persistently,
‘You can love her, but why can’t you love me?’
She loved him. From when she was a
child till she became a woman, she had always been watching him. No one knew
him better than she did, yet, he always ignored her existence? Why was it that
Du Miaofu who got him? On what basis?
‘You’re mine! Mine! Mine!’ she
screamed wildly, her red maddened eyes make people afraid.
‘I don’t belong to you.’ Yaotang
replied coldly, his eyes contained no trace of affection for her, ‘Give her
back to me.’
‘Her? Hahaha!’ she laughed madly
and turned to the audience, ‘You want her?’ she pointed to Jiang Yan, ‘You want
her?’ She turned back to Yaotang, her eyes were filled with cruelty.
She rushed to the dressing table
and picked up a pair of scissors which she held against her neck.
‘What are you doing?’ Chuwei
panicked rushing forward.
‘Don’t come near me!’ Shaoqing
shouted, she dug the sharp scissors into her skin and blood flowed down, ‘Don’t
push me, or I will kill us both!’
Chuwei’s steps faltered, not daring
to move forward.
Shaoqing turned to Yaotang and
smiled, ‘Do you want to see her? I could let you see her, or I could make her
disappear forever.’
Yaotang watched her without saying
anything.
‘So what is it going to be?’
Shaoqing asked pushing harder and more blood flowed, ‘Do you want her to be
hurt, huh?!’
Yaotang’s eyes were cold and his
hands were clenched so tightly blue veins appeared, ‘Fine…’
‘No!’ Shaoqing suddenly screamed
dropping the scissors, ‘You dare appear? You are not allowed! Fuck off! Scram!’
she screamed then her head dropped.
The sudden development made
everyone feel weird.
Shaoqing’s body collapsed to the
floor and she began to roll about, then finally stopped. After a while, the
fallen body rose from the floor and looked at everyone with tired eyes.
Yaotang’s eyes lit up and he rushed forward to hug her gently shivering body,
his large hand held covered the bleeding wound on her neck. She lay weakly in
his arms, her breathing laboured, her face was pale and blood-stained.
‘Miaomiao,’ Chuwei cried
recognising her friend, she squatted down, ‘Miaomiao, how are you?’
‘Chuwei…’ she wanted to smile but
she was so tired. Her eyes dimmed and she fainted.
A single candle flickered in the
room. (Zuben: Is it because she is
unwell, you can’t have any light?)
Yaotang sat at the bed holding her
small hand in his. His watched her sleeping face closely. Her face was pale and
her lips were bloodless.
What had happened this morning had
horrified all of them, but she had been slumbering since, yet they feared her
waking up.
How could this be? He asked Chuwei,
what secret did they hold? How could there be two souls in one body?
Jiang Chuwei looked at him with a
heavy expression, ‘If you want to know, ask Miaomiao,’ and she left.
The others were too fascinated by
the strange situation, but they knew the gravity of it all so they did not dare
intrude. Qin Yaotang was left in private.
He watched her with a grave heart,
and when he saw her eyelashes flicker, his could not help but tensely hold his
breath. When her eyes opened and he saw the clear eyes of the one he loved, he
relaxed and caressed her face, ‘Are you awake?’ (Zuben: No I’m practising being
alive)
Miaofu blinked slowly and looked
around, she was in her room in Gu Yunbao, ‘You’re…’ how could he be here?
(Zuben: You guys has a rape shag then a proper shag)
‘Come, have some water to drink.’
He said sitting her up so she was cradled in his arms. He put the tea cup
against her chapped lips.
Miaofu drank thirstily.
When she had enough, he put her
gently back into bed and went to get a bowl porridge that had been warming on
the small stove.
‘You’ve been sleeping all day, are
you hungry?’ he asked as he ladled a spoonful of porridge, gently blew on it
and fed it to her.
She looked at him and ate the
porridge. The sweet porridge was fragrant, and the grain was soft and tender,
gently filling her mouth and warming her heart.
He fed her, she ate; they did not
speak, yet the atmosphere was sweet. (Zuben: Urgh)
After she had finished eating, he
put the bowl aside and wiped her mouth with a handkerchief. After, he pulled
her into his arms and gently caressed her soft hair,
Miaofu rested against his chest
listening to his heartbeat, and her eyes were filled with light, ‘I am not Pei
Shaoqing.’ She said softly.
‘Nn.’ He replied lightly.
‘My name is Du Miaofu and I am not
a person of this world…’ she told him everything.
As he listened, though it was
magical, he believed her.
‘This body is indeed Pei
Shaoqing’s; it is okay for her to take it back.’ She said tightly.
‘Why do you have to give back your
body?’ he whispered.
‘I…’ She hadn’t known Chuwei, and A
Hao was here too. Now there was, Huangdi-gege, and the Dowager who cared for
her, she was reluctant to give the body back, she wanted to live.
‘How…how did you recognise me?’ How
could he distinguish between her and Shaoqing. (Zuben: Magic)
He looked down at her; his fingers
stroked her eyes as he said, ‘How could I not recognise my woman.’ His tone was
sure, without hesitation.
Miaofu’s ears felt hot and her pale
face faintly flushed, ‘Who is your woman? You are married to Dié er…’
‘I’m not married to Dié er,’ he
interrupted her, ‘Dié er likes my second brother. Six months ago, they got
married.’ He paused before he added, ‘She came to Xiangcheng because of him.’
Miaofu listened slightly pouting.
‘Anything else? Is there something
else you would like to know?’ he asked looking down indulgently at her. His
expression moved her heart and gave her courage,
‘So why were you so mean to me? Why
did you bully me so much? What do you think of me?’
Yaotang made a face, ‘Because that
was the only way I knew,’ his tone was dry, ‘At first, I just thought teasing
the new Pei Shaoqing was interesting, who would have guessed that I would
become more and more attached to you, but you did not care for me at all. You
just wanted to hide or escape from me.’
So he had been angry, and he could
only use despicable methods to make her pay attention to him, make her put him
in her heart, even if she hated him, at least she was thinking of him. (Zuben:
What nonsense)
‘So you bullied me, did so many bad
things just so I could pay attention to you?’ she asked with an incredulous
look on her face.
He nodded with a blush on his
handsome face.
‘It was excessive! You bad guy!’
she glared at him, but she had a small smile on her lips, his clumsiness made
her laugh. She had been hurt, and made miserable by his actions but listening
to his explanation she could not help but forgive him. (Zuben: Lunatic)
‘You stupid, stupid silly man!’ she
said scolding him. (Zuben: I think there are better words like sadistic
arsehole, rapist, torturer etc etc) But the smile on her face grew wider.
Yaotang got upset and wanted to
fight back, (Zuben: What the hell has he got to be upset about? These simple
words are annoying him?!) but the smile in her eyes calmed his heart; it seemed
to be the first time she truly smiled at him.
His heart was filled with thick
joy, ‘Yes, I am stupid.’ He replied, ‘very stupid.’
She smiled at him and he let her
scold him.
‘You…’Miaofu bit her lips and could
not scold him anymore.
Yaotang kissed her eyes, ‘Don’t run
away from me again, okay? Even if you hate me, don’t ever do anything so
dangerous, okay?’ His heart still ached from knowing she had fallen off a
cliff.
Miaofu nodded gently, and hugged
him.
‘I can’t escape.’ She admitted. She
had given him her heart. She didn’t know when it started but she had him in her
eyes. It was only the inferiority complex that made her unable to face him, so
she fled. But running away for a year, she had been unable to forget him.
He held her tighter, ‘You will
always stay with me, won’t you?’
Miaofu wanted to nod but she
hesitated, ‘But Shaoqing…’ she was afraid. She was afraid that Shaoqing would
not let her go. She could see everything that morning. She had been aware but
her soul had been shackled by the invisible darkness. When she struggled the
shackles got tighter leaving her helpless, nervously watching Shaoqing’s
actions. When Shaoqing hurt herself to threaten him, she wanted to stop her,
but she didn’t know how to break free. Just when she was about to fall into
despair, she heard him say “Very well…”
She had grown agitated and angry,
shouting desperately not being able to bear it, in spite of the pain that came
from resisting the darkness, her heart cried; how could he let Shaoqing win?
No way! Absolutely not! She forbid
Shaoqing from winning –
She was furious and screaming and
the darkness retreated. She was surprised to find she could move. She finally
took back ownership of the body, but she knew it was temporary; Shaoqing would
not give up easily. Thinking of Shaoqing’s obstinacy, Miaofu could not help but
be fearful. She had witnessed Shaoqing’s madness in her mind, she did not
hesitate to hurt herself to get what she wanted; such obsession was terrifying.
‘Don’t be afraid, I will find a
way.’ He promised trying to appease her.
He won’t let her disappear.
Never!
Zubene-san! After this novel, will you be translating the third novel of the series? (Note that the series include 3 novels: Dark Empress, True and False Young Master, and Bunny Hubby). I made a novel request in NU, to share and promote the novel for future readers. I hope you'll take up the project! The smut in the Bunny Hubby novel are more into teasing than actual smut scenes. I love the novel story and character interaction the most. It's sooo cute and hilarious. I'll help you check on some translations if u need help. The story is more humor, so it needs good understanding of Chinese slang and jokes.
ReplyDeleteBest of luck and regards <3
I was thinking about it. To complete the circle so to speak, but not till the new year though. Thanks for the offer of assistance - much appreciated.
Deletethank you for the chapter
ReplyDelete'The sudden development made everyone feel weird'
ReplyDeleteNo words better describe it..
Can't ignore the fact that she just made moe moe at him after all his rapey-ness
Tell me about it...
DeleteI feel especially irritated that the book gave him excuses for repeatedly raping the girl and she takes it so lightly that she forgives him as soon as she sees him
DeleteThis is a terribly unhealthy relationship and I'm super disgusted.
I think I prefer my Dark Empress, even though that one is almost bigoted
is it the end? *sad* or, more smut to come?
ReplyDeleteHappy Holidays ��
One more chapter but this is the last of the explicit smut :(. Happy Holidays to you as well^^
Deleteside comments of Ms/Mr translator was very funny and really accurate. Gosh, im not feeling the sparks.
ReplyDeletehnm.. how ironic.. isnt what he did to her (DMF) exactly what the original PQS did to him (QYT)? bully him for attention... just wow LOL! i was left speechless by this bt still persevered til the end.. lololol eventho the rape scenes made me cringe and put out but not much as to make me drop it.. one thing that made me go through it all was the curiousity of how he'll redeem himself... bt like ive said this left me speechless lololol
ReplyDelete"... at least she was thinking of him. (Zuben: What nonsense)"
ReplyDeleteHahahaha Zuben, thumbs up!!! I wonder if this was a long novel, like 200 chapter, would you have the patience to continue translating???
Gads No! Hell No! I need to see the light at the end of the tunnel, evne if it is just a glimpse XD
DeleteI live for zuben's side comments!
ReplyDelete….do these authors not understand that when you violently assault a woman and purposefully cause her pain you do DAMAGE so when you’ve gotten your jollies off and five minutes later decide to bang her again with slightly more consideration, you are not starting from scratch and pleasure is going to be harder to achieve since you’re harassing wounds?
ReplyDeleteMan, I can enjoy some dark/yandere romance but I prefer more self awareness in the narrative/author. It feels like they threw in the restored spirit to distract from having to make any satisfying resolution to his actions. Make your hero do dark stuff, fine, but then actually deal with the fallout or keep the tone and context consistent. Oh well.