I am a grumpy old codger and this is a "get off my lawn!" The long answer to those who take issue with my running commentary: There have been so many co-signitaries of late, I forgot about the people who don't like running commentary. I do this for fun. I do it because I love reading and writing. Zubenechamali Zuben El-Genubi makes running commentary. This is me in real life. I make running commentary watching movies, tv shows, reading - if there is no one to hear, I will talk to myself. I make comments within the story because, I would have forgotten by the end. The chapters take me over two to three days. And I want to make comments when something is incredulous, when it's funny, when it's fuckery, when it's sad. I don't have people to share this segment of my life with except you dear readers, so I want to share what I found funny, where I found it funny or all those other things. Not a boring cursory comment at the end, that could very ...
