I liked the story originally done by
C-Novel Project; he/she dropped it so I thought I might give it a go. I understand Chinese even less than I do Japanese; so if the machine translations and my editing are not up to lofty standards, please go read it yourself. Links to 1-33 and the original book are in the Index page. 💝 Fore-warning: I make
Running Commentary.
Who is Controlling You?:
Zhengquing woke up to see Yin Ting
staring at him. They stared at each other for what seemed like a long moment,
then Zhengqing realised he’d fallen asleep. He saw Yin Ting smile at him.
Yin Ting watched Zhengqing rub his
face as he sat up and groaned.
‘I’m not usually this tired.’ He
said, he felt like he should assure her that he was healthy, and not a
lethargic old man. Falling asleep in front of her twice was an accident. It was
a matter of pride.
‘I know,’ Yin Ting replied in an understanding
manner, trying to help him find an excuse, ‘the cat must be very troublesome,
so you haven’t been resting well.’
Zhengqing found Miao-dada beside
him; the cat was sitting up beside him and gave a prolonged yawn and stretched
lazily, as though it had just woken up, ‘It’s because it is in an unfamiliar
environment. It will get better.’ He said. He did not want to complain about
Miao-dada, he thought Yin will feel guilty and try to find it another home.
Miao was very important to him now.
Yin Ting merely laughed and did not
say anymore. Zhengqing got up quickly
and went to wash his face. He looked in the mirror; average thirty three year old
face, not aged, not showing the vicissitudes of life, not tired looking.
Conclusion: So far so good.
After performing some ablutions, he
returned to fine Yin Ting standing in the living room with her bag on her
shoulder, looking like she was ready to leave, ‘Since everything seems in
order, I’ll be taking my leave, oh’
‘I’ll drive you back,’ he said
without hesitation.
Yin Ting laughed, ‘No need, you’ve had a
tiring day, the taxi is convenient.’
Zhengqing did not want to appear
over eager or pushy or too obvious, so he said, ‘Alright, ah, be careful on
your way.’
‘Yes.’ Yin ting replied laughing.
Zhengqing laughed along with her, though his heart was a-kilter.
He walked her to the door, as Yin
Ting put on her shoes, she said, ‘I took lots of photos today, when I sort them
out, I’ll send them to you.’
‘Sounds good,’ thinking the
pictures of Miao-dada would be used to advertise its adoption, he quickly said,
‘Let me adopt Miao. You don’t need to go through the trouble of finding
someone. And my conditions are good and you can come and see him at anytime.’
Yin Ting cocked her head and looked
at him, ‘Are you sure about this? He’s a very naughty cat, oh.’
‘It doesn’t matter, I think it is
cute.’ He said.
‘If you get tired of it, please
tell me quickly so I can have enough time to look for someone else.’
‘Will do,’ Zhengqing replied in
agreement, though he doubted that would happen.
‘If I get a boyfriend and he
doesn’t mind cats, or I get married and my husband is fine with cats, can I
take Miao-dada back?’ Yin Ting asked earnestly while batting her lashes.
The absolute convoluted ludicrousness of that
question had him equal parts flummoxed and panicked, but he replied in his
trademark calm yet serious manner,
‘I’m afraid I can’t answer this
question at this point in time. After all, who can say what will happen
tomorrow. At the moment, Dada is now my cat, right? You don’t know when you’ll
meet your boyfriend, or know when you’ll get married, by which time; Miao-dada
and I would be a lot closer, like family even. How would I be able to give him
away then?’
Simply put, the cat has entered his
house. He wasn't coming back out again!
He realised he may come across a
bit heated and he wondered if she might be angry. However, even if she was
unhappy about his reply, one can’t be soft-hearted if they wished to win. To
have another man interfere was unacceptable. Whatever the outcome, he was now
Miao Dada’s guardian and this was an advantage he was not letting go of.
But Yin Ting wasn’t angry; she
merely raised an eyebrow and cocked her head to the side. In that moment, she
looked quite like Miao-dada,
‘You’re right,’ she said, ‘I know.’
Zhengqing let out a sigh of relief. Yin Ting
opened the door to leave, a sudden thought popped out,
‘Will you be coming tomorrow to see
Dada?’
Yin Ting laughed,
‘No, I have something on tomorrow;
I’m out with my friends. It’s not good to always bother you. Maybe some other
time,’
She had intended on spending her
weekend at home or to come here and play with Dada, but she changed her mind
because she’d spent too long here
Zhengqing’s heart sang. Who was this friend?
Was this another blind date or a meeting with a prospective boyfriend? But he
did not let his distress show, ‘Alright, we can text each other anyway.’
‘Yup, see you,’ she said with a
smile and then she was gone.
Zhengqing closed the door and
turned back to the living room to see Dada sitting on the sofa watching him. He
walked over and picked it up, and stroked the cat. ‘If she finds another boyfriend,
I am going to change your name to Miao xiao xiao.’
Miao-dada gave a displeased purr and struggled
a bit.
Zhengqing continued to rub it,
‘Then I will put up your photos on my microblog everyday and white about
Miao xiao xiao and my little family.’ He held Miao up and looked into its eyes
and continued, ‘I want to be her boyfriend, so wish me success or your name
will get changed. Xiao Xiao is also pleasant to hear, kind of like those little
poops you bury. We'll do that.’
Miao opened its eyes very wide and gave a loud
meow.
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Yin Ting got into the taxi still laughing, her
grin was so wide the taxi driver asked, ‘Young lady, has there been a happy
event?’
Yin Ting nodded and said ‘Yes, a
happy event.’
She felt really happy, if he
contacted her in the next three days, she would award him extra points. Why? He
was so proactive it got her happy and excited (Zuben: Points, huh? A person’s
feelings…)
Later that evening, Yin Ting
finished touching up the photos she’d taken and mailed them to Zhengqing when
Qin Yu Fei called.
‘Don’t tell me you are still at
Please be serious’ house?’
‘No but I will be going back there
later.’
‘You’re actually going to go back
there?’ Yufei said trying to ridicule Yin Ting.
‘Why not?’ Yin Ting said, ‘I will
be thinking about a good strategy.’
‘What sort of strategy?’ Yufei asked
hunting for gossip.
Yin Ying did not reply, but asked,
‘How did you know you liked Gu Yingjie, and decided to be with him?’
Yufei made a thoughtful sound and replied,
‘That is…hard to say,’ (Zuben: I’ll tell you Yin Ting: They had sex, it was
good. The End. °_°)
‘Right? I don’t know how exactly I
feel. I think I might like him, but it is still complicated.’ Yin Ting said.
‘It is not the same!’ Yufei snapped
snappily, ‘Your ambiguous situation is not the same thing. That night, there
were fireworks, I was...’ she trailed off. She had been with Gu Yingjie, but
suddenly lost him. She looked for him, her mind blank with distress. The sky
exploded with fireworks and suddenly he was there, also looking for her. They
held hands so tightly never wanting to let go (Zuben: What are you; children?’)
She could not put into words the
feelings she had at that moment. All the feelings of resistance fell away.
‘Fireworks? Although, that is very
romantic, but I don’t think I can rely on fireworks to tell me how I feel about
him. You seem confused.’ Yin Ting said in a teasing manner.
‘Yes. Yes, you know best. But don’t
forget that it is Please be serious we’re talking about here.’
‘This is the problem,’ Yin Ting said,
‘I will have a plan and not rush into things. Let me tell you, oh, he asked me
to come to see him tomorrow but I refused. I used my sense, thinking a little
distance would be good from time to time.’
‘So, you really like him?’ Yufei
asked, she really still cannot believe that there is something brewing between
these two.
‘I don’t know.’
‘Really dangerous.’
‘But I am so happy!’
‘Well,’ Yufei said, ‘Happiness means
you like him.’
‘You can’t be sure,’ Yin Ting
replied, ‘you say he likes me but how? Why? Also that I like him? But at that
date I third-wheeled, he talked about work. He seems to like talking about
work, and he is very serious and diligent. I find work such a boring topic to
talk about.’
‘At least you know well,’ Yufei
said softly, her friend was fortunately sobering.
‘Ah!’ Yin Ting suddenly called out.
‘What?’ Yufei said, scared.
‘Nothing, I just suddenly
remembered he hadn’t replied the email I sent him for a long time, but he has
now.’
Yufei had black lines, ‘Wait a
minute, you guys mail each other?’
Yin Ting did not answer for a while
as she was reading the mail. As she read it she couldn’t help but laugh and
give him another score. So happy!
‘Listen. Listen! He said, he liked
my photos, and he wants me to accompany him to pick a camera. That he’s a
layman and he is hoping I could teach him what to get and how to use it.’
‘An excuse,’ Yufei said her tone
droll.
‘Yes, so cute.’ Yin Ting said,
excitement bubbling within her. This excuse was so perfect ‘He said he wanted
to take wildlife photos,’
‘Yeah, right,’ Yufei said, sarcasm
dripping in her voice.
Yin Ting laughed, ‘Let me tell you,
oh, I tried to see what’s what and asked him today whether when I have a
boyfriend or a husband that will help me look after Miao-dada, he would give
him back to me. He refused! He said a lot of half arsed reasons why. It was so
cute. It was so hard to keep my face straight. I wanted to die from the need to
laugh.’
Black lines hung over Yufei, what
was so cute about that?
‘I thought he would say “No
Problem”, after all, he is very generous. I did not expect him to get so
annoyed. He was so serious and shy, and a little awkward. So cute, you should
have seen it…’
Yufei interrupted, ‘I beg you stop
right there. Do not describe – do. Not. Describe. The image in my heart has
collapsed. I really do not want to imagine Zhengqing as cute and shy and
awkward. No, thank you.’
Yin Ting laughed, ‘Anyway, he is very cute.’
‘Xiao Ting, liking a man and liking
the idea of molesting a man are definitely two different things, don’t get it
mixed up.’
‘You! You’re the one that likes
molesting men.’ Yin Ting said vehemently in reply. Molesting? What does she
mean by that? How could that be?!
‘I’m molesting too. I just like
molesting my own.’ Yufei replied.
‘Yes, well I was only happy. No I
did not molest anyone. It’s called observation.’ Yin Ting said spirit, ‘I am
studying the specimen- it is not molestation.’
‘Whatever you say…’ Yufei said, too
lazy to put up a fight.
Yin Ting hung up the phone and read
the email Zhengqing sent again; she could not help but laugh. ‘It is not
molestation it is a study!’ She cheerfully sent a reply saying: ‘Sure, happy to
help, tentatively scheduled for Saturday? We can decide a specific time later.’
Zhengqing replied: ‘Okay,’ shortly
after.
Yin Ting looked at the two words
and giggled for a while. She was suddenly struck with inspiration. She went to
a men’s clothing shop website. She looked for a man’s coat and sent pictures of
two versions of the coat in different colours to Zhengqing saying, ‘I want to
give my brother a coat. Which of these would look good? Personally, I think the
blue is good ah, it might actually suit you. Which do you think would suit my
brother?’
Zhengqing replied, ‘Brown.’
Yin Ting laughed and replied, ‘I’ll
get him the brown, then.’
Two days later, Yin Sheng received
a gift from her sister; a brown coat. He said, ‘I do not like brown anymore.’
‘Who is controlling you?!’ Yin Ting
said getting up in his face.
At the same time, Zhengqing went to
the mall to find the store of the brand that stocked the blue jacket. He saw
the jacked on the mannequin in the window. Zhengqing looked for a while and
thought that the coat looked good; Yin Ting had a good eye. He bought the coat.
She said blue would suit him.
Maybe he would wear it on Saturday
when he goes camera shopping with Yin Ting. She hasn’t met with him much and
would not know he went out to buy it especially.
I will try to keep the language as 'pure' as I can but if it sounds like shit, it's going for a more Western version. I will not promise to do this on the regular because there is very little chance of 'pay-off' but I have enough smut in line to tide me over, and I will do this when it all gets too much😩
I'm glad seeing someone picking up this novel again. Thank you! Just a small question: would it be possible to translate chapter 5 till 19 also? C-Novel Project skipped them.
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