Dear lovelies,
The Snu-snu is long. Here’s the first
part of your fap material.
11 Help Me:
In the Imperial Capital, there were
many families that were the forefront in the military, political, commercial,
medical and legal fields. But in truth, there were forces behind those that
superseded them. They rarely appeared in the entertainment pages or media, but
all the families were committed to them, so that their industries could reach
greater heights.
Gong Qiye, a general in the army. He
was given his stars at a young age for two reasons; he had made great
contributions to the military and the country, and his identity and background
were beyond the reach of normal people. He had an oppressive aura, with a grim
expressionless face full of a soldier’s resolution. He was always dressed neatly;
his buttons were always done up, exuding a kind of ascetic atmosphere. (Zuben:
Riiiight)
Ye Hanyu was a well-known politician
in the Imperial Capital. As long as he opened his mouth, all the politicians
bowed and obeyed. He was known to be shrewd and cunning. In the political
arena, fraught with smiling enemies, he showed a façade of deceptive gentleness
and elegance. When his fox-like smile appeared on his face, it meant that
someone was going to unlucky. (Zuben: Uh huh)
Xiao Muchen was a business tycoon, and
he had a cool personality, with great communication skills. His eyes were
obsidian, and his features were like a carving. (Zuben: Are the others
pudding?) His body was perfectly proportioned because he was a body builder as
well. The Xiao group had fingers in many pies all over the world, as long as he
stamped his foot, it could shake the economy. (Zuben: I shudder in dread)
Situ Yi, (Zuben: Like Sima Yi…?) was a
doctor with a wide and varied expertise. He could save or kill with just a move
of his little finger. (Zuben: Shwoo!) It all depended on whether he was willing
or not. He had a strong sensitivity to drugs, (Zuben: In what way?) his
personality was cold and indifferent (Zuben: Like all the others?) He did not
care for people and things. (Zuben: Should go wear burlap and live in a mud hut
then. No?) His delicate features were androgynous, but his body was very
masculine. (Zuben: Of course, it is)
Mu Zeyuan, was a senior official in
the legal field, a senior official in the political field under his father. His
mother was an European aristocrat whose emerald eyes he inherited. (Zuben:
Pftt-hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha) He could bring failed judiciary cases
back to life if he wanted. He was used to controlling things with his hands.
(Zuben: Things? What things? Rubik cubes?) He wore glasses to hide his true
feelings. Only people who were familiar with him could read him. (Zuben:
Glasses in fiction are such magical items. People are blinded by the incidental
light reflected on them)
(Zuben: Together, they are THE FAB
FIVE!)
‘Tut, no one should be able to get in
here.’ Xiao Muchen’s pure black eyes, like an abyss, casually glanced at the
woman slumped against the door. (Zuben: The universe wants you to fuck). He had
a white shirt on. (Zuben: Don’t they all.) With the upper buttons open showing
off his honey glazed skin. He was sitting on a leather sofa, one arm across the
back and the other twirling a wine glass stirring the red wine within it. A
kingly presence, compelling the world to submit to him.
Gong Qiye pressed an intercom button,
‘Come and collect a person.’ And hung up without preamble. He was in his
military uniform; his visage was like a knife. His narrow eyes are framed with
soft dense long lashes, staring at the woman coldly. (Zuben: Do the lashes wash
windows as well?)
‘Please…help me,’ she cried, ‘I’m of
the Mo fam-’ just as she was about to identify herself, a strange man burst
into the room. Seeing Mo Yan, he dragged her by the arm without a trace of
gentleness and pulled her to the door.
‘No! Let go…’ she protested tearfully.
The effect of the drug had spread, she was unable to resist.
A faint fragrance emanated from her.
‘Wait.’ Situ Yi called coming round
the billiard table, his face an impassive mask. He placed his club down and
walked up to Mo Yan and the man.
Notes from the author:
This is pure fiction, don’t take it
too seriously.
(Zuben: Dear Author, sometimes taking
things seriously is all in good fun)
12 Fei Yan (H):
Situ Yi crouched beside Mo Yan and
grabbed her chin to look at her face. He sniffed the rosy lips and took in her
delicate face which was almost indistinguishable from his own face. (Zuben: He
can fall in love with himself) His dark eyes sharpened in an instant. As doctor
with strong sensitivity to medicines, he could immediately ascertain the kind
of drug the woman had been given, (Zuben: so that’s what that means)
‘It’s Fei Yan.’
Two bouncers entered the room and
bowed low,
‘Accept our apologies, sirs, we’re in
breach of our duties. We will take them out at once.’
The two men were shaken, pale and cold
sweat ran down their backs. They had to please these men else, they would not
be able to ever work in the capital.
‘Drag this man out. Leave the woman.’
Situ Yi commanded vehemently, surprising the others.
‘Yes, sir!’ the bouncers immediate
manhandled the man who had been grabbing Mo Yan and dragged him out of the
room.
‘Wait, I need to take my girlfriend
with me.’ The man protested struggling.
‘Is he your boyfriend?’ Situ Yi knelt
over Mo Yan and asked her.
‘No…he’s not. Please…help. I’m the
eldest daughter of the Mo family.’ She said through pants, she looking
imploringly at the handsome man hoping for salvation, but she did not realise
she had escaped one wolf and encountered a wolf pack.
‘Get him out.’
‘Yes!’
‘Let me go! Let go!’ The man protested
all the way out the door, and the door closed cutting off his voice.
‘Yi, why?’ Mu Zeyuan asked pushing his
glasses up.
‘Well, Fei Yan is an aphrodisiac that
only appears in the black market. It makes the drugged person emit a fragrance,
and anyone who inhales that fragrance is also affected. The only way to solve
it is to…have. Sex.’ He said with a pointed glance at Mo Yan.
‘You mean we have all been affected by
it?’ Ye Hanyu asked calmly. He had his trademark fox-like smile on his face,
his eyes flashing in annoyance.
‘Dammit, is there no other way?’ Xiao
Muchen asked, annoyed that they had been inexplicably drawn into a situation
where he would have to sleep with a woman he didn’t know.
‘Well, it would be best to settle
accounts at the end.’ Yi said with a coldness emanating from him, ‘We have
never been coerced in our lives – rather novel. So, who wants to go first?’ (Zuben: You were never coerced.)
Qiye put down his glass and rose,
‘Whomever dares try to manipulate us,’ he said as he crossed the room to where
Mo Yan lay and crouched beside her, he held up her small chin, ‘must be
prepared to bear the consequences.’
‘Un~’ she panted, ‘feels good~’ Mo Yan
said. Her body was slack, a refreshing and intoxicating scent was pouring from
her delicate body. Her smooth skin was flushed under the effects of the drug.
Tears were pouring out of her lovely back eyes. But she rubbed her face on his
large hard hands trying to alleviate the heat she was experiencing.
Qiye’s eyes narrowed and he picked her
up roughly from the floor and took her to the sofa he had been sitting on. He
lay her down and parted her soft white thighs pushing himself between them. Her
lace panties were damp. He ran a hand darkened and callused from training under
the sun along the seam of her panties. Mo Yan was breathing hard, making the
phoenix on her chest rise and fall as though it was about to fly away. (Zuben:
Which dude is this one?)
‘Save me…it’s so hot…’ she cried. Her
eyes were closed, she had a frown on her face from the discomfort. Her lashes
fluttered against her cheek like the wings of a butterfly. (Zuben: I think Sima
Yi can do that trick too) Her tendrils of her black hair was stuck to her cheek
damp with perspiration. The sweat made the small face glimmer in the low light.
Her lips were parted from moaning, unable to ease her own suffering, she could
only weep helplessly.
Qiye ripped the flimsy protection
covering her intimate place. Her flesh had become bright red from constantly
rubbing against her panties. From her body, fresh sweet dew poured out accompanied
with a sweet fragrance. Qiye’s eyes suddenly burned with lust, and unbuttoned
his trousers, releasing his huge male root. He grabbed her waist and pushed
into her without mercy.
She screamed.
13 Say My Name:
‘Stop! Let go! Ah!’ The deep tearing feeling
made Mo Yan regain her sanity, but the man inside her was relentless. Her
honeypot was tight and narrow, and all she felt was pain. But she was weak
under the effect of the drugs, she could barely fight back.
‘She’s a virgin.’ Qiye announced feeling
the deep tightness within her. He pulled out slowly, and there was some blood
mixed with her love juices. He was surprised. In their chaotic social circle,
there were only a few women who had never had sexual relationships. It wasn’t
that they were smarter women, but that they were well cared for by their family
and never went to the dark hidden places as they were growing up. He felt that
his woman was one such like that.
The lust had built up in the other men
staring that the two of them copulate. Their penises had become visibly
engorged.
‘Don’t clip…relax,’ he said through
groans.
Mo Yan’s little hole was tight and hot
and felt as though there were countless small mouths constantly sucking on his
invading member. (Zuben: Who? How? Who came up with this phrase?)
Qiye pulled on his willpower to
restrain the thrill of eruption. His large hand moved up from her willowy waist
and unbuttoned her cheongsam, revealing her red lace bra which made her skin
look even whiter. Qiye pulled down the cups to reveal the full breasts and
filled his hand with one, pressing the nipple against the palm of his hand. The
woman began to moan in earnest. With his other hand, he held open the girl’s
thighs she was trying close as he continued to grind upwards into her.
‘Ah~ Hn~ so full~ so good~’ Her red
lips moaned unconsciously. Her arms weakly clung onto his shoulders. She
frowned lightly as she began to succumb to the pleasure the drug induced. Her
small hole tightly absorbed his hugeness, as though she did not want to let the
man leave. Her honey liquid continuously flowed from where they intersected
unto the leather sofa. Her skin, which was like sheep-fat jade, glowed rosy
under the influence of drug induced lust.
Qiye’s breathing was getting heavier
as he began to drown in the enchanting pleasure he was experiencing in the
woman’s body. Everytime, he thrust, the woman unconsciously mewled. He became entranced by her expressions and he
leaned down to kiss her sweet lips. One hand constantly rubbed her breasts,
teasing the nipples while his other hand was between her legs, pinching the
small red nubbin engorged from the pleasure as his large phallus was drawn in
and out of her. He was enjoying the tight honey pot that sucked and pinched
around him tightly.
‘Hm~ ah…it’s so hot…hurry up…I
want…give me…oh~’ Mo Yan had lost sense of reality, and she continued to moan
her drug induced desires in her charming voice. Her body was wriggling
underneath him matching his thrusts.
‘Temptress…’ Xiao Muchen muttered. He
was sitting next to them drinking wine. His legs were crossed over in relaxed
repose, but his crotch was tight and aching. (Zuben: Trying to look cool)
Gong Qiye’s cock was hard like iron
and getting thicker under the grip of her flower ramp. He was spreading open
her flower path, constantly thrusting up to the hidden bud. He gently touched
the hand print that odious man had left on her with his callused hand. His eyes
flashed with a cruel light, before leaning down to suck on the snow-white skin
of her breasts, leaving red marks. He ran his hands down the woman’s body
wanting her to relax. (Zuben: You have to make a choice, do you want her to be
tightly using her thousand mouth pussy to suck on you or do you want a well?)
‘Nn~…nn~…ah~ ha~ don’t…ah~ ah~ ah~’
she cried.
His black eyes took in every detail of
her expression as he continued to pump into her. He could feel the bud in the
depths of her, and he continued to push up against it, greatly pumping his hot
iron - hitting the mouth of her palace again and again.
As he hit the bud, his cock was
tightly held by her and Qiye groaned and closed his eyes. After resisting the
desire to erupt, his continued to mercilessly bombard her flower place. The
woman began to try to push away from him, but he pulled her back to him
pinching her nubbin making her love juice pour out as she climaxed and
tightened around him.
‘What’s your name? Tell me…’ Qiye said as he continued to attack her body
not waiting for her to recover from her orgasm. His narrow hips continued to
push in, and he breached her palace. Her body arched, and her intimate muscles
tightened around him squeezing and sucking.
‘Ah~ stop~ you’re killing me~ please~’
she tried to fight but she couldn’t not get free of his restraint. She could
only submit to his pumping. Her fingers tightly gripped his wrist, but she
could not stop him.
‘Tell me…’ he said. He began to tease
her; sometimes thrusting up deep inside her, sometime shallowly rubbing his
large glans around her dewed flower petals. His hands continued to caress her
inflaming her lust.
‘Mo…Mo ah~ ahn~ my name is Mo Yan…~’
An itch was spreading from deep inside her out to her whole body, she could not
resist the drug’s effect. She could only give him what he wanted so he could
relieve the discomfort.
‘Good, my name is Gong Qiye…remember
it.’ He said as he thrust up forcefully and slammed into the depths of her
flower palace. (Zuben: What’s my name? Say my name!)
14 For Me (H):
Mo Yan threw her head back and
screamed out her orgasm, her white neck was arched in a beautiful curve. The
pleasure from the climax was endless. Her bright eyes were unfocussed as tears
poured out of them.
‘Damn it, don’t be so tight. Do you
like to be fucked like this, hn?’ he said in a deep magnetic voice directly in
her ear before licking a delicate lobe and biting it.
‘Oh~ Un~ it’s too much…please…stop ah~
let me rest~’ her sweet moans filled the private room. The large glans pierced
through into the deepest part of her flower palace. The swelling of her flower
cave made her toss her head from side to side and cry helplessly.
‘How could I? Aren’t there other
people waiting to enjoy you?’ he said through grunts and pants, ‘First of all,
I’ll give it to you.’ The tight hold was sucking on him vigorously, Qiye became
even more violent with his thrusts constantly piercing her flower palace. It
was as though he wanted to break her most precious place. (Zuben: Why is this
the most precious place?) His face looked dangerous and charming under the haze
of lust.
He twisted her little core with his
fingers hard.
Mo Yan could not bear it, ‘Ah! You’re
breaking me! Ah ~!’ Her delicate body could not with stand the full force of
his lust. (Zuben: Sorry, like he said there’s a long line) Her head was pulled
back and tense, her body convulsed and trembled from the pleasure. Once again,
she was submerged in it.
Feeling the fleshy walls shrink and
suck tightly, Qiye pumped within her flower palace, (Zuben: Because there is no
other name I know to call it), then with one final thrust, he filled her with
his hot white cock milk.
He pulled out slowly, and watched as
her body oozed out his turbidity from within. His black eyes squinted in
self-satisfaction and lust.
‘My turn,’ Xiao Muchen put down his
glass and picked up the limp woman from Qiye. (Zuben: Muchen tapping in) He
quickly unbuttoned his trousers and pushed his engorged penis up against her
swollen flower lips. He rubbed it up and down the petals and bud, trying to
stimulate her body.
‘Her lower mouth is very tight, give
her a good fucking. Who told her to come and seduce us…’ Gong Qiye said with a
wicked smile as he leaned back in his seat and sipped his wine. His usually
meticulous uniform was now messy from his strenuous activity.
Xiao Muchen slowly pushed into to her
flower whole and hissed at the suction, ‘Hnn~, she really sucks on you…so
tight.’ He said. As he felt as though he was sucked continuously, his obsidian
eyes flashed dangerously. He clasped her wasp waist and rushed in, straight up
to her palace.
When the last man had come out of her,
Mo Yan just wanted to sleep. But she lifted by another man, he lay her on the
sofa and parted her legs unceremoniously. He began to constantly flirt back and
forth at the entrance to her body, and then suddenly, he violently pushed in.
Her delicate cave could not prevent such a strong intrusion. Large dick pushed
through the narrow path straight up into her palace. Her body danced under his
actions, and her mouth spat out a cry for mercy,
‘Ah~ too big~ please…too much~ stop.
Ah~!
15 No biting
‘You were fucked by Qiye so long, hn,
but still so…tight! Is it to seduce us? Ah…’ Muchen’s large hands kneaded her
round tender buttocks making red marks appear on her snow-white skin. He kept
pushing into her, sometimes kissing the mouth of her palace, sometimes invading
the place with his hard glans. Two fingers pinched the red plum on the
snow-white bunnies on her chest. Pinching and rolling as he enjoyed her lower
mouth massaging his male root.
‘Ah, please…go out…don’t press uh~’
Her blush made the magnificent face more delicate and charming. (Zuben: So many
superlatives!)
Mo Yan wanted to push off from the
sofa but was immediately stopped by the man behind her. Her hair had fallen
into disarray around the golden rose hair pin. Tendrils of her hair kissed her
snow-white neck and reddened cheeks. Muchen could not help but kiss the skin on
her back leaving red berries on the delicate skin. This made her body more
sensitive, and as he sucked on the sensitive skin on the crook of her neck, Mo
Yan’s small hole shrunk even tighter.
Muchen paused and groaned before
thrusting into her with great force.
Her slender fingers gripped the
leather beneath her to brace herself from his onslaught.
She sobbed, ‘Please let me…go’ Her
lush lashes were wet with tears, her face was a mask of hovering between pain
and pleasure.
‘Darling, keep on crying out. Open your
legs wider, let me love you more deeply.’ Muchen’s face was full of lust, his
voice was magnetic compelling one to obey.
‘No~…oh~ ahn~’ Mo Yan moaned as
crystal like tears ran down her face and dropped on the leather sofa. She bit
her lip painfully trying to keep her mind clear so she would not continue to
indulge in lust. But she could not help the small groans, that burst from
within.
‘No biting,’ Ye Hanyu pulled at her
chin drawing the full bottom lip from her teeth, ‘your body is ours. Cry out
more.’ He pushed his rough thumb between her teeth to stop her from ravaging
her delicate red lips.
‘Um~ ah~ stop~ slow…down…a little,
please!’ She continued to beg for mercy entwinned with charming cries.
Ye Hanyu pushed his fingers into her
mouth. He had a fox-like smile on his face and his black eyes were also filled
with lust
‘Suck with your little mouth,’ he said
as he pushed his fingers back and forth in her mouth, sometimes scratching the
roof of her mouth with nails, sometimes pulling her tongue with his fingers,
sometimes thrusting deep down her throat, so Mo Yan could only suck and suck
his long fingers.
‘Honey, are you trying to break me?
Relax open your legs more…’ Muchen said as he slapped her round buttocks with
his large hands. His phallus was large widening the enchanting body under him
as though he wanted to dig the limit of the beautiful woman. One hand held her
down from trying to struggle, the other hand forcibly pulled her legs wider
apart, and his knees kept her from closing them. There was an obscene slapping
sound as his lower abdomen struck her soft buttocks with rapid thrusting.
‘Ahhhh~ I’m going to break. I’m really
going to break ah~ stop ahn~’ she sobbed but the cries ignite the men even more,
wanting to brutalise her body.
As Mo Yan’s body was thrust forward by
Muchen, Hanyu’s fingers entered her throat. The two men played with Mo Yan’s
sweet body.
too hot >///<
ReplyDelete-/////- thank u
ReplyDeleteHahahaha; thanks to your sarcastic comments, I can't read this seriously :'DD
ReplyDeleteAnyways, thanks for the translation! It's awesome that you updated so many chapters at once<33 :)
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ReplyDeleteThanks for the chapters! ^ ^
Thanks for the laugh...your comments are one of the reason I like your translation. Why take things too seriously when life is so short.
ReplyDelete‘Together, they are THE FAB FIVE’ I’m dying, this is pure gold!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the update! 💕
Thank you Luv 😘
ReplyDeleteno password. it's cold and lonely without your site... now, it's back to smutty smut fiesta!
Thanks for the update. I'm dying from too much laugh thanks to your slapstick counter. Haa~ :'D
ReplyDelete🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈.. 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 and I thought I read it wrong hot white chocolate milk eh cock milk 🤣🤣🤣
ReplyDeleteThank you
This is like the smutty F4 but with the fab five, haha
ReplyDeleteI’m so embarrassed reading this and not because of the sexy stuff, but because of the generous career descriptions of the harem members. So cheesy! How old are these men!? It sounds like they’re all already at the peak of their professions. Are they in their 40s? I need to know how handsome they are, but right now I only know their jobs. I can only think of general and politicians as old baldies.
ReplyDeleteThe Fei Yan drug can only be solved with sex?! I’m pretty sure that’s NOT how drugs function, Doctor Useless! Also it's an airborne drug? Isn’t this how a plague works, not an aphrodisiac?!
OH NO! I got to the part where they’re all getting aroused from watching General Baldy go for it. CREEPY! SO CREEPY!
Anyway, isn’t the bigger problem that these events are basically repeating the other girl’s ( the MC in the book) storyline? Author, couldn’t you change it up just a little bit?! Why are there two harems running around with the same set up? Why do all these men want to be in a harem? Is there a supermarket deal going on? Buy 1, get 4?! Where can I pick up a set?!
I think I enjoy the running commentary more than the actual story. You are truly a gem.
What a lovely comment! I am super chuffed!
DeleteWell, it's a given that they are super handsome, but you need to know why they are powerful.
LOL at Doctor Useless and General Baldy! That cracked me up.
I think the author is well aware she's not bringing anything new to the table, just smut smut and smut. Still, I do agree with you about changing it up. The heroine doesn't have to turn into a crazy psycho, just because the villian reformed.
HOT WHITE COCK MILK .... sounds delicous if you don't know what cock is... You know like emm hot white chocolate milk 😂😂😂
ReplyDeleteWait ... That drug infects them by sharing air with the infected. What would have happened to the guards?
ReplyDeleteNobody knows...
Delete(Zuben: Together, they are THE FAB FIVE!)
ReplyDeleteThis killed me 😭
Love your comments. Make it much better. Love the sense of humour
ReplyDeleteI want to kill you for saying what my mind say �� , i want to ignore but I can't. Love you �� thanks for the chap
ReplyDeleteSmut plot and don't expect a good romance novel here as most of what's happening doesn't follow the norm (but it does follow cliche smut story and isn't anything new so to speak). It's a reverse harem novel with possessive and oppressive MLs that's an okay read if you want some snu snu. Would've rated the novel a 3 if not for the translation.
ReplyDeleteThe translations are not bad per se, but the translator likes slipping in their thoughts as they translate, which messes up the flow of reading and you can't help but feel the need to deter from reading further as you can't really focus on what's going on without being disrupted. Don't get me wrong, I (usually) like reading most translator's thoughts as they're entertaining, I just wished they could've placed them after the paragraph (maybe a click and show kind of thing or at the end) and not intermixed with the story they're translating
I agree to your opinion when i fist read this i really want to suggest to the translator to put her comment on the last, but i guess its the translator style and enjoyment.
DeleteI rereqd this again then got shock how the font and style change i thought it was different translator but once your comment show ups.... it stills you but your website looks elegant right now. I rember how a little piss am i to your comment cuz thats what i think when im reading it but it also made me not fullly focus to the smut (you know ehem ) . But yeah ....hi nice to see you again.
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